【真題再現(xiàn)1】
你喜歡過生日嗎?你的生日過得開心嗎?每個人都曾有難以忘懷的生日。請以My Birthday為題寫一篇短文,介紹你最開心、最難忘的一次生日,讓大家分享你生日的快樂。(2011年衡陽卷)
要求:1. 詞數(shù):80左右;
2. 語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和所在學校的名稱。
【參考范文1】:
My Birthday
March 5th is my birthday. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning,I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school,I helped my deskmates to repair their broken chairs. After school,I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
點評:這是一篇記敘文,作者第一句話就交代了生日的時間,開門見山,直奔主題,值得學習。然后說明慶祝生日的方式與往年不同,接著以時間(in the morning,at school,after school)為主線詳細闡述其不同點。最后用感嘆句表達自己的感受,同時也表達了幫助別人的意義。短文思路清晰、語言簡潔、主題突出、結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
【真題再現(xiàn)2】
假如你是圖片中的人物,請你根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容及所給提示,完成下面的日記。(2011年湘潭卷)
June 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn’t work.
【參考范文2】:
June 7th Tuesday Sunny
I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didn’t work. When I woke up,it was 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there,I missed the school bus because it had already gone. So I had to walk to school. Finally,when I got to school,it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework,I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was!
點評:該篇是日記式應(yīng)用文,為?嫉奈捏w。作者根據(jù)圖片提示的內(nèi)容,清楚地交代了周二早上發(fā)生的事情。最大亮點在于時間狀語的使用多樣。如:when I woke up,by the time I got there,finally等。含過去完成時的復合句運用也非常恰當。最后的感嘆句What a bad day!抒發(fā)了作者的感受。
【真題再現(xiàn)3】
許多學習生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力。為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學們存在的心理壓力問題,學校特意舉行了一次以Less Pressure,Better Life為主題的英語演講比賽。請你準備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學們分享,內(nèi)容包括:
1. 同學們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;
2. 你的壓力是什么;
3. 你是如何緩解壓力的。
注意:文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80~100;短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。(浙江省臺州卷)
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure.
That’s all. Thank you!
【參考范文3】:
Less Pressure,Better Life
Hello,boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates,while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure,too. My parents want me to be the top student in my class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening,I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed me at last.
So in my opinion a conversation with parents is a good idea to solve the problem.
That’s all. Thank you!
點評:這篇范文先對班內(nèi)同學普遍存在的壓力做了說明,接著介紹了自己的壓力以及解決壓力的方法。層次清晰、內(nèi)容全面、結(jié)構(gòu)完整。以自己的親身經(jīng)歷為例子,具有親和力,也更具有說服力。
【技巧點撥】
從歷年各地的中考英語作文題目看,無論是哪種文體,涉及的內(nèi)容和主題都貼近學生的生活。針對身邊的事情和現(xiàn)象,結(jié)合自己、學校、家庭和社會進行寫作,讓同學們能有感而發(fā)、有話可說。
分析以上三篇范文發(fā)現(xiàn),只要大家做到認真審題、語法正確、連接恰當、妙用復合句、精彩結(jié)束,作文成績一定令人滿意。
Powerful Sentences For English Writing
英語寫作實用句型
在英語寫作中,有的句型搭配功能很強,適用于各種文體。多積累和背誦這些句型,會使寫作得心應(yīng)手。仔細體會并嘗試背誦下列句子中運用的詞匯及句式。
【日常生活篇】
1. Do you feel tired without having enough rest?
沒有足夠的休息你感覺累嗎?
2. I’m afraid that I can’t get used to the new school.
我擔心不能適應(yīng)新的學校生活。
3. My junior middle school life will come to an end soon. But I will never forget the things that have happened in the past three years.
我的初中生活就要結(jié)束了,但是我永遠都不會忘記這三年里發(fā)生的點點滴滴。
4. Keeping a balance diet is very important.
保持平衡膳食非常重要。
5. We should form the good habit of eating more vegetables and fruit.
我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成多吃蔬菜和水果的好習慣。
6. It’s important to have three meals a day.
一日三餐很重要。
7. Playing computer games has become an important part of his life and it seriously influences his study.
玩電腦游戲成為他生活中重要的一部分,已嚴重影響他的學習。
8. Mobile phones are of great importance in our everyday life.
手機在我們的日常生活中起著非常重要的作用。
9. As you know,doing morning exercises everyday is good for your health.
人人皆知,每天做早操對你的健康有好處。
10. My topic today is how to eat in a healthy way.
我今天的話題是怎樣吃得健康。
【環(huán)境保護篇】
1. Taking care of our environment is very important.
愛護環(huán)境非常重要。
2. Whenever you live,you can do something around your neighbourhood.
不管住在哪里,你都可以在住所周圍做些事情。
3. It is our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy.
保持環(huán)境干凈、整潔是我們的責任。
4. If everyone makes a countribution to protecting the environment,the world will become much more beautiful.
如果人人為保護環(huán)境做些貢獻,世界就會變得更加美麗。
5. It’s a pleasant way to keep our city clean and tidy.
這是使我們城市干凈、整潔的好辦法。
6. It’s wasteful to throw away paper and metal.
隨便扔紙和金屬是浪費行為。
7. We all need a healthy environment,but we produce waste every day and it does harm to our environment.
我們大家都需要一個健康的環(huán)境,但是我們每天都生產(chǎn)垃圾,這對我們的環(huán)境有害。
8. Though we are young,we can still do something to help.
雖然我們還小,但仍然可以做一些對保護環(huán)境有用的事。
9. In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.
事實上,即使是非常簡單的日常行為也會對環(huán)境產(chǎn)生很大的不同。
10. Remember these three words:reduce,reuse and recycle.
記住這些詞:減少、重新利用和再利用。
【活動、敘事篇】
1. The best time visit my town is in May,because it’s neither too cold nor too hot.
游覽我的家鄉(xiāng)最好的時間在5月,因為那時天氣不冷也不熱。
2. My hometown is a best time to visit. There are many palces of interest here,such as...
我的家鄉(xiāng)是旅游觀光的好地方。這里有很多名勝古跡,像……
3. I had a picnic with my parents during the May Day,and we had a very good time.
五一期間我和父母去野餐,過得很愉快。
4. We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides.
我們看到一條兩邊長滿綠草、開滿野花的小溪。
5. We were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.
我們完全被大自然的奇妙和偉大折服了。
6. I spent the whole day in the countryside with my friends,enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in the country.
我和朋友們在鄉(xiāng)下度過了整個下午,欣賞美麗的風景,呼吸新鮮的空氣。
7. We enjoyed ourselves very much. / We had a great time.
我們玩得很高興。
8. What a wonderful weekend / holiday / day we had!
我們過得真愉快!
9. I’m looking forward to having the summer holiday.
我盼望暑假的到來。
10. The USA is a big country to visit,so choose carefully the places to see and the time you go.
美國幅員遼闊,需仔細挑選要去的地方和要去的時間。